Some people believe that companies and individuals, rather than governments, should pay to clean up the pollution they have caused. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Pollution

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is one of the biggest problems in every country caused by

individuals

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or

companies

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. Even though the

government

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has a

responsibility

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for the problems,

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apply

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an individual and the business owner should pay attention and be aware

about

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the

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pollution

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. I completely disagree if only the

government

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has

responsibility

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in

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for

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causes

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. PEEL (Point, Explain, Example, Link Back) First of all,

dealing

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with the issue

about

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the

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pollution

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and waste from

individuals

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or

companies

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, the

government

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has to be aware of

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situation. They should have facilities to help

companies

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or

individuals

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to throw away the

pollution

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on

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the right spot. It is very important to acknowledge that governments have a

responsibility

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to regulate and control the activities of

individuals

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and

companies

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to ensure they do not harm the environment.

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, the

government

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can bring new technology and research to finish the

pollutants

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problem.

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, it is

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an obligation for

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individuals

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and

companies

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to take

responsibility

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for their waste.

By making

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them pay for the damage

their

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they're

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caused

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, it will

creates

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the

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awareness

for

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to

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throw

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away

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waste or

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pollution

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in the right places. It

is

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sends a message that environmental health is everyone's

responsibility

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and not just the

government

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’s. In conclusion,

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both governments and

individuals

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or

companies

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have an important role in having

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responsibility

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in

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case.

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governments have the power to maintain and control the activities,

individuals

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and

companies

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must

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take

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for what they do. By working as a team, I hope it could create good effects

for

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the

pollution

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on

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planet.