Some people believe that companies and individuals, rather than governments, should pay to clean up the pollution they have caused. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Pollution

is one of the biggest problems in every country caused by

individuals

or

companies

. Even though the

government

has a

responsibility

for the problems,

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an individual and the business owner should pay attention and be aware

about

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pollution

. I completely disagree if only the

government

who

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has

responsibility

in

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this

causes

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. PEEL (Point, Explain, Example, Link Back) First of all,

dealing

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with the issue

about

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pollution

and waste from

individuals

or

companies

, the

government

has to be aware of

this

situation. They should have facilities to help

companies

or

individuals

to throw away the

pollution

on

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the right spot. It is very important to acknowledge that governments have a

responsibility

to regulate and control the activities of

individuals

and

companies

to ensure they do not harm the environment.

Moreover

, the

government

can bring new technology and research to finish the

pollutants

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problem.

However

, it is

also

an obligation for

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individuals

and

companies

to take

responsibility

for their waste.

By making

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them pay for the damage

their

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caused

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, it will

creates

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the

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awareness

for

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throw

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throwing

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away

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waste or

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pollution

in the right places. It

is

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also

sends a message that environmental health is everyone's

responsibility

and not just the

government

’s. In conclusion,

it is clear that

both governments and

individuals

or

companies

have an important role in having

a

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responsibility

in

this

case.

While

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governments have the power to maintain and control the activities,

individuals

and

companies

must

also

take

responsibility

for what they do. By working as a team, I hope it could create good effects

for

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the

pollution

on

this

planet.