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The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given chart illustrates how much
does
Unnecessary verb
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people earn in different countries doing jobs, like
namely
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names
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, policemen, nurses, firefighters, and underground drivers from the beginning of their working period and after three years. Salaries are measured in
pounds
Use synonyms
. In general, it could be seen that earnings haven't changed over three years. Looking at the details, it could be highlighted that only policemen's wages have changed more than others. To be more correct, it experienced a rise from 21000
pounds
Use synonyms
 to 23000.
Other
Correct article usage
The other
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 one has climbed to 1000
pounds
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 after three years of working. The table gives information about people's working hours during the week for the same professions.
Overall
Linking Words
, what stands out from the table and bar chart is that underground drives work less than others, 36 hours per week, but they earn more money, 50000
pounds
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. Concerning firefighters, they work more than policemen, nurses and drivers, but they paid a little
but
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smaller than underground drivers.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words pounds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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