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Write a letter to a friend who is coming to stay at your apartment while you are away on vacation. In your letter, •Tell him/ her about your flat. •Give him/ her some instructions about his/ her stay. • Tell him/ her what to do in case of problem.

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Hello, my dear friend Nataly. How are you? I am fine and I hope, your condition is positive. Nataly,
l
 have a lot of news in my lifetime. But one of the best news is in my life, that,
l
 am going to Canada for a holiday.
However
, as you know,
l
 have a flat in the city. I live in it. But
l
 would not my flat be neglected after
l
 leave.
Therefore
, if it is not inconvenient for you, please, reside in my home until
l
 come back. OK? To tell the truth, my flat is really
cozy
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, beautiful, comfortable and there are all needful rooms in it.
For example
, living room, bathroom, bedroom, fully equipped kitchen.
Furthermore
, there is a parking for cars near my house.
In addition
,
l
 am instructing you about my flat... If you can not open the
door
 of my flat, do not worry.
Then
, you may go in into the house through a small
door
. It is situated behind my flat.
As well as
, if you need some products, you can take them from my neighbour's store. In general, you never forget To look up the
door
.
Otherwise
, it may cause many problems.
Such
 as the street full of thieves. That, if you do not lock the
door
. They can enter the house. Nataly,
l
 have only these instructions for you. As for your close friend Rayxona.
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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