There are two different types of ideas about environmental issues. Some people think that it is the loss of specific species of plants and animals, while others claim that there are vital ecological problems. And in this essay, both views will be examined

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There are two different types of ideas about environmental issues. Some people think that it is the loss of specific species of plants and animals,

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others claim that there are vital ecological problems. And in

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essay, both views will be examined. On the one hand, since we know every kind of creatures, especially plants and animals are the most important for the ecosystem. Unfortunately, in recent times, a large amount of wildlife, including trees has been destroyed for many reasons.

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natural

disaster

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and

human made

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. So, some people believe that

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is the main cause of environmental

problem

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problems

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because

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humans

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cannot live alone without other species.

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, everyone must eat to live, if we do not have animals,

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, and fruits, we cannot survive in

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world.

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, I don’t go with

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viewpoint

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mentioned above. I believe that there are many factors which cause the problems.

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, using energy from electricity, using petrol for a car engine and using plastic or un-recycle packaging. And plastics remained in the soils and water release toxic chemicals over the years, and contaminate the climate. In conclusion, there are many causes which affect the environment, but we have only one world. So, we should take care

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global and concentrate on

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natural

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for the best future life.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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There are two different types of ideas about environmental issues. Some people think that it is the loss of specific species of plants and animals, while others claim that there are vital ecological problems. And in this essay, both views will be examined

Your opinion

Art classes ,such as painting and drawing,are as important to a child's development as other subjects,so it should be compulsory in high school.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that we should not study history, as it has little or nothing to tell us. Do you agree or disagree.

These days it is much easier for many people to travel to different countries for tourism than in the past. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages.