There are two different types of ideas about environmental issues. Some people think that it is the loss of specific species of plants and animals, while others claim that there are vital ecological problems. And in this essay, both views will be examined

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There are two different types of ideas about environmental issues. Some people think that it is the loss of specific species of plants and animals,

while

others claim that there are vital ecological problems. And in

this

essay, both views will be examined. On the one hand, since we know every kind of creatures, especially plants and animals are the most important for the ecosystem. Unfortunately, in recent times, a large amount of wildlife, including trees has been destroyed for many reasons.

Such

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natural

disaster

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and

human made

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. So, some people believe that

this

is the main cause of environmental

problem

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problems

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because

human

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humans

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cannot live alone without other species.

In addition

, everyone must eat to live, if we do not have animals,

fishes

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, and fruits, we cannot survive in

this

world.

On the other hand

, I don’t go with

this

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viewpoint

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mentioned above. I believe that there are many factors which cause the problems.

For example

, using energy from electricity, using petrol for a car engine and using plastic or un-recycle packaging. And plastics remained in the soils and water release toxic chemicals over the years, and contaminate the climate. In conclusion, there are many causes which affect the environment, but we have only one world. So, we should take care

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global and concentrate on

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natural

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for the best future life.

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4 paragraphs

226 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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There are two different types of ideas about environmental issues. Some people think that it is the loss of specific species of plants and animals, while others claim that there are vital ecological problems. And in this essay, both views will be examined

Your opinion

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