You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart
illustrated
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illustrates
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the comparative
scores
between three groups,
team
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teams
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A, B, and C, from 2002 to 2005. The horizontal scale showed the years,
while
the vertical scale showed the number of
points
each
team
scored. The report revealed that
Team
B gained the highest
points
in 2002
while
Team
C’s score in 2005 was the lowest
scores
. Both teams A and B dramatically fluctuated from 2002 to 2004 because
Team
A’s
scores
rose from 5 in 2002 to 35 in 2004, 7 times upped from the first year. On the other
hands
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hand
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,
team
B’s point in the first year was 82 but fell to 43
points
in the next two years. Even if
team
B’s
points
dropped, their
scores
were higher than those of the other groups by 8 and 31
points
higher than those of groups A and C, respectively.
Moreover
,
team
C earned a score lower than 17
points
in all four seasons and slightly fluctuated from 2002 to 2004, increasing from 10 in 2002 to 15 in 2003 and decreasing to 12 in the following year.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words scores, team, points with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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