You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart
illustrated
the comparative Wrong verb form
illustrates
scores
between three groups, team
A, B, and C, from 2002 to 2005. The horizontal scale showed the years, Fix the agreement mistake
teams
while
the vertical scale showed the number of points
each team
scored.
The report revealed that Team
B gained the highest points
in 2002 while
Team
C’s score in 2005 was the lowest scores
. Both teams A and B dramatically fluctuated from 2002 to 2004 because Team
A’s scores
rose from 5 in 2002 to 35 in 2004, 7 times upped from the first year. On the other hands
, Fix the agreement mistake
hand
team
B’s point in the first year was 82 but fell to 43 points
in the next two years. Even if team
B’s points
dropped, their scores
were higher than those of the other groups by 8 and 31 points
higher than those of groups A and C, respectively.
Moreover
, team
C earned a score lower than 17 points
in all four seasons and slightly fluctuated from 2002 to 2004, increasing from 10 in 2002 to 15 in 2003 and decreasing to 12 in the following year.Submitted by kanchanakularathna1991 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words scores, team, points with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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