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Some people say that the Internet will soon become the preferred method of delivery of news and information, causing newspapers and magazines to gradually disappear. Do you agree or disagree?

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In recent years, many
people
 have argued that the public will access
news
 and
information
 only through the
Internet
, not from
newspapers
 and
magazines
 which will be no longer used. I
also
 agree with that and in
this
 essay, I will elaborate on the specific reasons.
To begin
 with, cutting-edge technology allows
people
 to use the
internet
 more frequently.
That is
 to say, because of high-tech devices,
people
 could use the
internet
 to find
information
 and
news
 not from printing media. New York Times, one of the major newspaper companies in the USA,
for instance
, invests three times more in online media than
newspapers
 to adapt to the modern phenomenon.
Moreover
, numerous pieces of
information
 can be seen on the
internet
.
In other words
,
people
 are only able to meet limited
information
 via
magazines
 or
newspapers
 that have barriers,
for example
, time and cost to be the market.
For
this
 reason, many
magazines
 and
newspapers
 have been discontinued and will disappear. The opponents might consider how trustworthy the
information
 on the
internet
 is. It can be somewhat true. It is
also
 one of the well-known facts in our society, unfiltered and fake
news
 goes viral on the
internet
 and often makes the public feel confused.
However
, it can
also
 be seen that governments from different nations make significant efforts to censor a lot of pieces of
information
 on the
internet
 and correct them immediately. The US government announced in 2020 with respect to fake
news
 and
information
 and implemented related policies which alert the US citizen. In conclusion, I believe that
newspapers
 and
magazines
 will no longer exist. Because of cutting-edge technology and a wide range of
information
, the
internet
 will deliver
news
 and
information
 despite a trust issue.
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