Rich contries often give money to poorer contries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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help to not developed

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by giving them money, but in ,reality it is not the solution to the problem.

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, rich

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should provide them with different kinds of help

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of financial aid.

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with, the most important feature of rich

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is valuable education. The majority of poor nations do not have access to good studies, and

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is the key to success.

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countries

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such

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as Brazil, India, Kenia etc. are suitable examples. And in these

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public schools even private schools can not provide well education.

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, some teachers do not have enough knowledge to tutor students. Perhaps, the best way to help poor

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is by providing better schools and developing the education

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they can advance their

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on some occasions, financial aid might be helpful. Governments can use the support from other

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to renovate their economy, infrastructure even they can restore their

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from catastrophe or war.

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,nowadays Ukraine

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money from their allies to rebuild their cities after the war with Russia. In conclusion, rich

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can either help with finance or fix the issue of poverty with another kind of helps and both ways of solving the problem are good and have a lot of advantages but I think the second approach is more suitable for poor

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because dishonest authorities can use the financial help in improper way.

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