Rich contries often give money to poorer contries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Developed
countries
help to not developed Use synonyms
countries
by giving them money, but in ,reality it is not the solution to the problem. Use synonyms
However
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countries
should provide them with different kinds of help Use synonyms
instead
of financial aid.
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To begin
with, the most important feature of rich Linking Words
countries
is valuable education. The majority of poor nations do not have access to good studies, and Use synonyms
this
is the key to success. Linking Words
For instance
, Linking Words
countries
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such
as Brazil, India, Kenia etc. are suitable examples. And in these Linking Words
countries
public schools even private schools can not provide well education. Use synonyms
Moreover
, some teachers do not have enough knowledge to tutor students. Perhaps, the best way to help poor Linking Words
countries
is by providing better schools and developing the education Use synonyms
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consequently
they can advance their Add a comma
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countries
.
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On the other hand
on some occasions, financial aid might be helpful. Governments can use the support from other Linking Words
countries
to renovate their economy, infrastructure even they can restore their Use synonyms
countries
from catastrophe or war.Use synonyms
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uses
the
money from their allies to rebuild their cities after the war with Russia.
In conclusion, rich Correct article usage
apply
countries
can either help with finance or fix the issue of poverty with another kind of helps and both ways of solving the problem are good and have a lot of advantages but I think the second approach is more suitable for poor Use synonyms
countries
because dishonest authorities can use the financial help in improper way.Use synonyms
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