In today’s globalised world studying abroad is getting easier than before. More and more people tend to get
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education in developed countries. Some individuals consider that if
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wants to be
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educated he should go abroad.
Nevertheless
,
others
believe that it is better to
study
in
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. In
this
I will discuss both
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of
this
argument and I will include my own viewpoint.
First,
for
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economy and
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country
government is interested in more educated citizens in its state.
Therefore
, nowadays the young are willing to be
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educated. People who pass the special exams go
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abroad with state line and
others
try to find other
. Individuals believe that if they
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abroad it will be easy
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them to find
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.
Furthermore
, employees who had
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edicationCorrect your spelling
education
medication
dedication
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get
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easier
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others
at work.
Moreover
, in my opinion, studying in
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country
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your horizons and you will learn about different cultures and
.
Turning to the other side of the argument, it is not easy to
study
far from your family members.
For instance
, students in our
country
usually live with their family and
this
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their life condition. I mean, they do not think about domestic problems and
to
study
.
Besides
, people who live and
study
in
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country
they often meet cultural
.
In addition
,
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between cuisine make them uncomfortable.
For example
, a friend of mine who studied in Chine lost 20
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while
living there.
To conclude
all above mentioned, the young try to be
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educated for good life and high salary job. Some prefer to
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abroad,
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consider it is better to get high education in
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. I think It does not matter where you
study
, the matter is to be
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person for your society.