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the grapg below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 AND 2007. summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given
graph
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 reveals information on the
emission
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 of CO2 per person in four different countries namely: the United
Kingdom
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, Sweden, Italy and Portugal. (from 1967 until 2007). The
graph
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 shows
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rate
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 in metric tonnes. To start with, the
graph
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 uncovers that there is some fluctuation in the proportion of CO2 from 1967 to 2007. In order to draw a line between these countries, the United
Kingdom
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 had the highest
rate
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 of CO2
emission
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 per individual in 1967 rather than the other countries. As time passes, there is a trivial reduction
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 it isn't the
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 in 2007.
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, Sweden had a lower
rate
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 of Co2
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 rather than the United
Kingdom
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 in 1967 but it increased about 1977 the decreased considerably until 1987. From 1987 until 2007, Sweden had a trivial reduction.
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, the
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 represents rockets in the
emission
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 of Co2 in Portugal in these years.
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, it illustrates a trivial rose in Italy. All taken together, the United
Kingdom
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 had the highest
rate
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 of Co2
emission
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 for each person in 1967 and 2007.
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, Portugal had lower
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emission
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 of Co2 in 1967 and 2007.
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