A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Alex, I hope you find

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letter in perfect health. I received your letter yesterday that you are planning to go on a camping holiday

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summer and I understand you have been thinking of doing

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for a long time. Summer is the best time for camping in my opinion as we get to explore lush green forests and birds chirping which is very healthy for our mental fitness.

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, it will be a nice getaway from the work-from-home routine. I am sure you must have done your research, but I will recommend you to be cautious when you go camping. It is very normal to encounter various kinds of reptiles near camping sites.

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, take water bottles with you because it is sometimes difficult to get clean water. I am sorry to disappoint you that I will not be able to join you

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holiday. I have exhausted my leaves already, but I will go on my next trip with you. I wish you a healthy and safe trip. Yours Lovingly, Sachin Sharma

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

176 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

adventure
serenity
outdoors
refreshing
hustle and bustle
inherent
foster
distractions
cost-effective
unpredictable
wildlife
adequate preparation
physical demands
researching
campsite
lasting memories
mutual interests

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