There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter -describe the complaints that have been made - say why the reception area is important - say why the reception area could be improved

Dear Sir, Hope you are doing well. I am writing

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email to give my suggestions to make the reception desk better. Details about

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discussed

further

in the email. As we are getting bad

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about the lobby. Highlight them, most of the complaints are regarding chairs stating they are not comfy enough for

longer

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waits.

Secondly

, there is no one to assist our

guest

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properly. And the

celing

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ceiling

fans are too slow during the hotter days.

However

, I feel reception is the first

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area

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that our

guest

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guests

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and clients visit and if that area is not maintained it will affect our brand as a marketing agency.

To begin

with , we can add

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comfortable sofas where visitors can sit and relax.

In addition

, TV can be mounted on the wall as waiting can be boring, so it can keep them entertained.

Moreover

, water dispensers must be added as I personally recommend, during the hot summers it will keep our guests hydrated. Talking about

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assisting our

visitor

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visitors

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we can plan to add the

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self check

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portal, which will make

easier

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for us

as well as

our clients or visitors. Looking forward to

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changes. Yours sincerely, Stuti Sheth