the chart below gives information on the percentage of british people giving money to charity for the years 1990 and 2010.
The bar chart describes the proportion of money that
citizens
from Great Britain between the ages
18
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of 18
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for
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between
years1990
and 2010.
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years 1990
Overall
, the highest number of British people who donated in the year 1990 is between the ages
36 to 50, while
for years
2010 is between the ages
of 51 to 65 years
. Also
, the least percentage of British citizens
giving out money for both years
is between the ages
of 18 and 25 years
.
During the year 1990, the number of funds donated among British citizens
rose from about 17% to above 40% among
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between
years
to 50 years
, followed by a steady decline of 35% to about 32% within
51 Change preposition
between
years
to 65 years
.
In 2010, however
, there is a progressive increase in the funds given up for charity from about 6% to almost 40% among people aged between 18 to 60 years
, which is then
followed by a slight reduction to 35% in citizens
aged 65 and above.Submitted by abaioluseyi7 on
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