the chart below gives information on the percentage of british people giving money to charity for the years 1990 and 2010.

the chart below gives information on the percentage of british people giving money to charity for the years 1990 and 2010.
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The bar chart describes the proportion of money that
citizens
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from Great Britain between the
ages
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18
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to
65have
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65 have
donated
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years1990
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years 1990
and 2010.
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, the highest number of British people who donated in the year 1990 is between the
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36 to 50,
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for
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2010 is between the
ages
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of 51 to 65
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.
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, the least percentage of British
citizens
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giving out money for both
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is between the
ages
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of 18 and 25
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. During the year 1990, the number of funds donated among British
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rose from about 17% to above 40%
among
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18
years
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to 50
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, followed by a steady decline of 35% to about 32%
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51
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to 65
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. In 2010,
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, there is a progressive increase in the funds given up for charity from about 6% to almost 40% among people aged between 18 to 60
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, which is
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followed by a slight reduction to 35% in
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aged 65 and above.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words citizens, ages, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • charitable giving
  • demographic analysis
  • economic factors
  • social awareness
  • technological advancements
  • societal values
  • donation patterns
  • functioning and effectiveness
  • speculate
  • future trends
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