the chart below gives information on the percentage of british people giving money to charity for the years 1990 and 2010.

the chart below gives information on the percentage of british people giving money to charity for the years 1990 and 2010.
The bar chart describes the proportion of money that
citizens
from Great Britain between the
ages
18
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to
65have
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65 have
donated
for
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years1990
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years 1990
and 2010.
Overall
, the highest number of British people who donated in the year 1990 is between the
ages
36 to 50,
while
for
years
2010 is between the
ages
of 51 to 65
years
.
Also
, the least percentage of British
citizens
giving out money for both
years
is between the
ages
of 18 and 25
years
. During the year 1990, the number of funds donated among British
citizens
rose from about 17% to above 40%
among
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18
years
to 50
years
, followed by a steady decline of 35% to about 32%
within
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51
years
to 65
years
. In 2010,
however
, there is a progressive increase in the funds given up for charity from about 6% to almost 40% among people aged between 18 to 60
years
, which is
then
followed by a slight reduction to 35% in
citizens
aged 65 and above.
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  • charitable giving
  • demographic analysis
  • economic factors
  • social awareness
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