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Today the internet has replaced traditional books as a source of information. Discuss the Advantage & Disadvantage.

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Nowadays, the excessive use of
internet
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 is considered an indispensable factor in our lives;
accordingly
, some people argue that using it as a source of information rather than traditional books is not efficient usage,
meanwhile
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 others think it is, but is it true?
This
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advantages
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 and disadvantages of
this
 phenomenon and provide
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 conclusion.
Firstly
, it goes without saying that using any tool without understanding its pros and cons has its own repercussions;
hence
, nowadays
internet
 became an indispensable tool that all of us
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 on it in every field,
then
, we can apply the same concept of using on it;
consequently
, one of the main disadvantages of using the world wide web is having a lot of fake knowledge which required many investigations, but anyone can avoid
this
 by using a trusted websites.
For instance
, if a student
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 to use a
well known
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 site like
google
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 to solve his homework, he will waste a massive time to find the correct and useful info.
In addition
 to that, we can not neglect the benefit of using
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internet
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, it is cheap, reachable and
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 anyone
an
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access
for
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 books and information that he will not get
them
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from
another sources
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.
For example
, and speaking about
my self
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myself
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, I bought a device called
"E-Reader"
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an "E-Reader"
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 which
allow
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allows
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 me to buy and read any book from
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any place in the world with little
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,
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 if I tried to bring
this
 book physically, I could not buy it because it is not available in my home country.
To conclude
, and
due to
 the aforementioned reasons, we may safely conclude that using
internet
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 as a source of information its benefits outweigh its drawbacks as it
give
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 anyone
an
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access to many sources of knowledge;
consequently
, we should encourage people to use it more but in a useful pattern to avoid its repercussions resulted from misuse of it.
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