People nowadays tend to have children at older age. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your opinion
Nowadays, people give birth to their
offsprings
when they are of Fix the agreement mistake
offspring
age
. Although
, childbirth at advanced age
might come with some complications. I believe the advantages offsets
the disadvantages as parents would have attained Change the verb form
offset
financial
and psychological stability needed for raising children and delayed conception can be corrected with sophisticated modern technology.
On the one hand, being Correct article usage
the financial
matured
enough to cater for kids tends to result in a wide range of benefits for both parents and their children. Replace the word
mature
In other words
, as age
advances, couples
seems
to have secured Change the verb form
seem
better
position in their employment and are Add an article
a better
the better
more fit
psychologically for their Replace the words
fitter
kids
upbringing. Change to a genitive case
kid's
kids'
Similarly
, they have social and economic stability, so the child will be nursed in a better environment and have good connection
based on family influence in the society. Fix the agreement mistake
connections
For example
, in a survey conducted among women of childbearing age
in Nigeria, it was reported that women age
35 and above are better at parenting than others. Meanwhile, if younger partners do not have sufficient source
of income and are not financially intelligent, it will hinder their Fix the agreement mistake
sources
children
education and mental well-being; Change noun form
children's
therefore
, after making career progression, having kids would be ideal.
However
, there are minor problems that comes
with giving birth at an advanced Change the verb form
come
age
. The most obvious ones are difficulty in getting pregnant, life threatening
conditions Add a hyphen
life-threatening
such
as eclampsia and sometimes offsprings of aged couples
developed chromosomal abnormalities such
as Down's syndrome. But these incidents rarely occur since most hospitals now have equipment that can detect congenital abnormalities in utero and most facility offer in vitro fertilization programs for couples
. For instance
, in Nigeria, most older women who gave
had their babies through in vitro fertilization have been discharged without complications and maternal-fetal mortality has greatly reduced. As Correct your spelling
have
this
is the present scenario, the benefits of aged parenting is
higher than Correct subject-verb agreement
are
issues
that might arise.
In conclusion, Correct article usage
the issues
although
giving birth at a much Correct word choice
apply
latter
Correct your spelling
later
age
has it
own disadvantages. I believe Change the pronoun
its
it
benefits Correct pronoun usage
its
outweighs
Correct subject-verb agreement
outweigh
it
demerits as Correct pronoun usage
its
couples
would be better prepared both financially and mentally.Submitted by oludayotemilade on
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