People nowadays tend to have children at older age. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your opinion

Nowadays, people give birth to their
offsprings
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when they are of
age
.
Although
, childbirth at advanced
age
might come with some complications. I believe the advantages
offsets
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the disadvantages as parents would have attained
financial
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and psychological stability needed for raising children and delayed conception can be corrected with sophisticated modern technology. On the one hand, being
matured
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enough to cater for kids tends to result in a wide range of benefits for both parents and their children.
In other words
, as
age
advances,
couples
seems
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to have secured
better
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position in their employment and are
more fit
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psychologically for their
kids
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upbringing.
Similarly
, they have social and economic stability, so the child will be nursed in a better environment and have good
connection
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based on family influence in the society.
For example
, in a survey conducted among women of childbearing
age
in Nigeria, it was reported that women
age
35 and above are better at parenting than others. Meanwhile, if younger partners do not have sufficient
source
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of income and are not financially intelligent, it will hinder their
children
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education and mental well-being;
therefore
, after making career progression, having kids would be ideal.
However
, there are minor problems that
comes
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with giving birth at an advanced
age
. The most obvious ones are difficulty in getting pregnant,
life threatening
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conditions
such
as eclampsia and sometimes offsprings of aged
couples
developed chromosomal abnormalities
such
as Down's syndrome. But these incidents rarely occur since most hospitals now have equipment that can detect congenital abnormalities in utero and most facility offer in vitro fertilization programs for
couples
.
For instance
, in Nigeria, most older women who
gave
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had their babies through in vitro fertilization have been discharged without complications and maternal-fetal mortality has greatly reduced. As
this
is the present scenario, the benefits of aged parenting
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higher than
issues
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the issues
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that might arise. In conclusion,
although
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giving birth at a much
latter
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later
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age
has
it
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own disadvantages. I believe
it
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benefits
outweighs
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it
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demerits as
couples
would be better prepared both financially and mentally.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Trend
  • Delaying parenthood
  • Biological clock
  • Financial stability
  • Emotional maturity
  • Health risks
  • Opportunity cost
  • Weighing the pros and cons
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