Some people believe that its best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.

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Some people think that accepting a hard situation

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as unhappiness with occupation or lack of capital is the best way of acting. Others can not agree with it and think that we should try hard to make our lives better. From my point of view, the first group of men are trying to satisfy as much as possible from what they have. And if they are not capable of changing something, it is better to continue their lives without worrying about it.

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called the philosophy of stoicism. As a typical case, when autocracy takes place in one country, and when corruption starts to raise, citizens are suffering. Inflation makes money no longer valuable, and working for the public becomes impossible with new laws.

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, stoicism tells us to relax

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and be happy in the moment despite all the situations.

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, there is a second group of people who can not sit in their places without doing anything. Personally speaking, I believe that

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is the best form of living. That individuals are the reason for progress.

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, when somebody does not want to live as a poor soul, they are starting a new business. Maybe, only selling flowers.

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, they are doing at least what they are able to do, so they can push their lives. As a ,result it is not necessary for them to feel happy at the moment. Life does not consist of only white lines, there is always dark with white, shadow with light. The only thing to do - is fight with the bad. Happiness is somewhere in the future for them. Taking everything into consideration, everything depends on personality. If a person wants to, he has all of the freedom to live a life

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given to him by fate.

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not anybody like that. For someone working hard is the only thing in life that can give satisfaction.

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Some people believe that its best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.

Your opinion

Giving detailed information of crime in newspapers and on television has bad consequences. Some suggest that government should impose some restriction on them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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