The Graph shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The Graph shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The line graph illustrates the rate of
carbon
dioxide
production per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal which were produced over 40 years from 1967 to 2007. Units are measured in metric
tonnes
.
Overall
, the average of
carbon
dioxide
in the United Kingdom and Sweden declined over the period given,
while
in Italy and Portugal, it climbed. Over the given duration the United Kingdom had the highest emission of
carbon
dioxide
. On the one hand, the amount of
carbon
dioxide
emmited
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emitted
in the UK started at around 11
tonnes
and it slightly decreased to about 9
tonnes
in the
last
year.
Likewise
, in
Sweden
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it began at approximately 9 metric
tones
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tonnes
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and
then
peaked at about over 10
tonnes
1977
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before falling dramatically to almost 6 metric
tonnes
in the final year.
On the other hand
, in
Italy
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the production of CO2 increased from just above 4 to just below 8 metric
tonnes
.
Similarly
, in Portugal it
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peaked
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at roughly 1 in 1967 and jumped to nearly 6 in 2007.
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