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In an era of globalization, some people think that studying abroad is the best way to attain a well-paid job while others believe other options are better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In
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 present world, studying in different countries is
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a trend. Even many people like to work in
same
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 nation where they studied. The argument that getting higher education from abroad is the best option to get a high paid job that both agreed and disagreed with many be thoroughly analysed ad discussed
is
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this
 essay before drawing a reasoned conclusion. On the first hand, choosing to study
in
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abroad for their best career is a good decision. For, example at
this
 moment lots of students from foreign countries are studying in
canada
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Canada
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, the main reason behind
this
 is that Canada is giving them more work opportunities which attract them to get
admisition
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admission
 to
canada's
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unversities
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universities
 and colleges.
On the other hand
, there are many fields where people can get jobs.
For instance
,
instead
 of moving to another country people can run their own small business afterwards by getting experience they can extend by investing more into their business.
Moreover
,
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 can learn
any
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specific skills
such
 as cooking, and mechanic plumbing and by using the skill they can earn money. To summarise, the two sides of the argument concerning the prospect of
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 to study
in
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abroad for n good money have strong support.
However
, after thorough analysis of both sides,
it is clear that
 the idea of consideration of other things
better
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 than moving
to
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abroad.
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