1. Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures ?

It is typically said that

today

's

youngster

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are pressurized by academic, social and commercial problems.

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essay will discuss the reasons

of

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these problems and provide certain measures to relieve the obstacles. I believe that young people must be preserved from growing

pressures

.

Children

have many academic

pressures

.

Today

's kid isn'

t

contesting with the child next door or even of one's city or nation. He is competing with

kid

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kids

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of the global village. The huge planet Earth of

past

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the past

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is

little

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a little

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well-linked global village of

today

.

Parents

would like their

children

to be perfect in every field.

Children

are sent to the best schools, where school bag is heavier than the child himself by

parents

. Even after school

hours

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they have private courses.

Children

aren'

t

given time to show their hidden abilities. And

also

they have many social problems and commercial

pressures

. Socially, the

children

of

today

are in a big dilemma. They would like to preserve the global culture that their

parents

don'

t

want. Every now and

then

this

makes them against their

parents

' rules. They

also

come across peer

pressures

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pressure

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.

This

peer pressure can help the increasing stress and strain on

children

. When they see many modern items

such

as computers, phones

and

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etc with friends, they would like to purchase them. If they don'

t

buy them, they will be stressed.

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The cure

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isn'

t

basic. Youngsters have to be handled with great care.

Children

should be given time and love by their

parents

. Schools and teachers have the biggest onus.They should try to show the best in every child and teach their

children

competition and cooperation. They should teach that goal of

contest

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a contest

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shouldn'

t

be to win and to win with modesty and lose with grace. Summing up, there is no suspicion that the youngsters of

today

are encountering so many

pressures

, but measures should be taken on a war footing to protect their innocent childhood.