Your neighbor keeps his/her animal in the garden. Write to him/her about it and the inconvenience it causes you and your family. In your letter · tell what the problem is · explain why it causes inconvenience · suggest a possible solution to it · say what actions you might take if the need arises. Write at least 150 words

Dear Kate, I am writing
this
letter in regard to
inconvenience
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the inconvenience
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we are suffering from your dog, which you keep in your garden.
Firstly
, the issue is that I am not able to concentrate on my office work whenever
your
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my
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dog is barking without any
reasons
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reason
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.
Secondly
, the reason why I feel
inconvenience
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inconvenienced
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is that it disturbs me during my meeting with customers. Sometimes, I need to postpone that meeting to another day because of
this
disturbance.
As a consequence
, my boss has a negative effect on my work.
Thirdly
, I would like to give one possible solution which you may like it. You can take your dog with you in your shop so that you cannot feel alone during
a
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the
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day, and I
am
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apply
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also
work comfortably and without disturbance.
Lastly
, if you are not taking action
then
I would contact to Animal House Department for making your complaint. I look forward to hearing from you. Best regards,
Milav
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Milan
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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