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The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer

The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer
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The diagram expresses the way to recycle compostable waste to make garden fertilizer.
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 the process, beginning
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 preparing a plastic container and ending
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 the product after six months. First of all, prepare a plastic container with four small holes divided equally on both sides so that air can circulate inside easily. The next step, pick up some organic waste including papers, newspapers, grass and food. Place a layer of food scraps at the bottom, followed by a layer of grass and on the top is the leftover paper, each layer is about 15cm high. Once prepared, put hot water and nitrogen in a plastic container. Close the mouth of the jar tightly and put the mixture outside, in a sunny and dry place, not flooded. After six months, fertilizer made from organic waste condensed at the bottom of the bottle can be brought out for use.

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