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Some people say that the best way to improve the overall general health of the public is to offer more sport facilities. Others say that this would have little effect and other measures are necessary to improve public health. Discuss both views.

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A major problem societies face in the twenty-first century is the decline in the level of public
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, due in large part to sedentary lifestyles and poor eating habits.
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 some feel that
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 can be best tackled by the provision of more
sports
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facilities
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, others argue that there are better options. I will examine both and explain why, despite the appeal to some
people
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, simply promoting would not be effective in improving
people
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’s
health
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. Certainly, building more
sports
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facilities
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 can be beneficial to some extent. Even though the importance of
exercise
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 is well-known, in many areas there are limited opportunities for the general public to
exercise
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 safely and affordably. In Kolkata, there are very few places for
people
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 to play
sports
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 or
exercise
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, which may explain the soaring obesity rate there. If the government funded amenities
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 as public
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 areas, swimming pools or tennis courts, more
people
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 would have access to them and be able to improve their fitness levels. In
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 areas,
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 may approve a viable solution.
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 policy,
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, does have its limitation. Indeed, some
people
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 are simply not interested in
sports
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, regardless of whether they are free and convenient
facilities
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 available. For them, alternative measures are needed in order to improve
health
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. Imposing higher taxes on junk food could be one way to do so, as
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 would deter many from choosing the cheap yet nutrient-deficient option. Another option is for the government to implement strategies throughout primary and high school to boost awareness of nutrition and the importance of regular physical activity. In conclusion, only focusing on the provision of
sports
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facilities
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 may not have the desired result of improving the general
health
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 of the public. Adopting an
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 healthier lifestyle should be encouraged, which incorporates both a certain amount of physical
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as well as
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 healthy eating habits.

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