New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In recent times,
the
cutting-edge Correct article usage
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technologies
transform the way teenager use
their leisure time. Although
I believe this
improvement is mostly a negative development, there are
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is
also
positive
aspect to it as well.
The enhancement of the Add an article
a positive
technologies
offers some downsides for adolescent
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adolescents
Firstly
, teenager
may have Fix the agreement mistake
teenagers
lack
of physical activities if the rest of their life Correct article usage
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to surf
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surfing
the
social media. If children always scroll Correct article usage
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their
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through their
app
, namely Facebook and Instagram, it will take a lot of portions of their time to do their hobbies Fix the agreement mistake
apps
such
us
playing football or swimming. Correct your spelling
as
As a result
, it will affect to
their healthy body. Another negative side is children may have difficulties Change preposition
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to improve
their attitude Change the verb form
improving
skill
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skills
For example
, if
some pupils get a lot of smart home Correct word choice
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technologies
exposure including using robots to help their
life activities Change preposition
with their
such
as buying groceries and cleaning their room. They will lost
their empathy if someone needs help and they will reluctant to assist them. Change the verb form
lose
be lost
Finally
, if the young age can not tackle their behaviour to use
the technologies
, they will become addicted to use
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using
it
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them
Hence
, they become dependent people
in the future.
On the other hand
, the
state-of-the-art Correct article usage
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technologies
have benefit
too. Fix the agreement mistake
benefits
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who can Fix the agreement mistake
Teenagers
use
the technologies
wisely and Fix the agreement mistake
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are fond
they
will search much information related to the field they feel curiosityCorrect pronoun usage
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.
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about.
For instance
, If the
young Correct article usage
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people
have a lot of questions regarding the climate change impact, they will use
on
the internet to rich their knowledge concerning green energy and net zero emissions power plant. Change preposition
apply
Furthermore
, they will become people
who have a number of knowledge in this
topic and become role models in their schools.
To summarize, when it comes to using the technologies
in their spend time, if pupils can use
it
wisely, it will have a positive impact Correct pronoun usage
them
for
them. Change preposition
on
However
, if teenagers cannot manage their behaviour to use
it, it will lead to the
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apply
to
their life so Change preposition
in
that
using technology becomes a less attractive option in the future for Correct word choice
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people
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