Some people believe that the best way to improve the general well-being of schoolchildren is to make physical education compulsory in all schools. Others, however, think this world have little effect on overall health and that other measures are needed. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Physical

health

is one of the most widespread topics these days

due to

increased obesity and

health

problem. Some people believe that to overcome

such

issues it is necessary that physical education should be made a compulsion for every

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However

, some

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of thought, believe that

this

is a technological era and

instead

of wasting time in maintaining

health

,

children

should be encouraged to learn computer-driven courses.

According to

my understanding ,

health

must be the first priority and

thus

physical exercise should be enforced.

This

essay will discuss both views with detailed explanations.

To begin

with, in

this

competitive world

parents

believe that their

children

should be equipped with technical knowledge

that is

of extreme importance to survive.

This

is because they would like their

children

to have better job prospects when they leave

school

.

For example

. some of the high-paying jobs these days merit several hard-core skills

such

as computer programming and statistical analysis.

Thus

,

parents

are more concerned about the competition they might face professionally rather than their physiological well-being .

However

, it is obvious that these same

parents

are forgetting the need for physical and mental strength these urchins will require when they face the real physical world.

Additionally

, to have a better job is important, but it is

also

important to be physically fit to perform the work.

Furthermore

, today's generation is incapable to perform hard labour and mentally challenging work because of obesity and

health

conditions.

Moreover

, because of

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,conditions they become dependent on others

as well as

consider themselves a burden to the family.

For example

, a recent survey demonstrated that the suicide rate was piqued in the past decade

due to

obesity and mental illness.

Thus

, it can be said that physical exercise is the most important activity for

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child. In conclusion, as per the aforementioned reason, it is of utmost importance to keep physical training subject mandatory not only to maintain physical

health

but

also

to make them self-reliant and confident. It is

also

suggested that

parents

themselves organise some physical activity at home so that to keep their child's mind and body active.