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More and more people are moving away from agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for work.What will be the consquences of this.What solutions can you offer.

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In a rather futuristic world, there is a tendency for
people
 to relocate from rural
areas
 to urban cities in pursuit of better career opportunities.
Consequently
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 depletion of the workforce can be seen in rural
areas
 and urbanization can get overcrowded.
However
,
this
 essay is going to depict both the drawbacks and solutions
for
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this
 concern. To commence with,
a
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rapid migration of
people
 usually coincides with technological outbreaks. Since the industrial revolution, human society has gradually shifted from craft production to machines. Availability of the limited
resources
 in backwards
areas
 has compelled the community to move towards the cities. Quality of health and education is the biggest cause.
Due to
this
 trend, a shortage of manpower in the agriculture sector can happen. It can aggravate the shortage of
food
 supply. The rural area is the main source of
food
, and less interest of
people
 towards agriculture can have severe consequences on cultivation.
Moreover
, overpopulation can
also
 happen in urban
areas
, which can
further
 create traffic and accommodation issues. Utilization of more
resources
 can
also
 aggravate the stable
food
 supply. The unemployment rate can increase in densely populated
areas
. Remedies to cope with
this
 global concern are imperative. The initiative needs to be taken at the state level to ensure
resources
 and equal opportunities in rural
areas
. Communities residing there need to be assured of quality health and education.
Furthermore
, awareness programs regarding the agriculture sector
also
 need to be made part of higher education. All vital facilities should be provided to farmers to enrich the basic source of our
food
. In ,conclusion serious remedies and steps need to be taken by the government to ensure that
people
 living in rural
areas
 have a well-being parallel to the standards provided in modern cities. As
this
 can overcome the shortage of human
resources
, which is the biggest concern.
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