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In most countries the number of people owning their own cars is on the rise. Is this a pasitive or negative development?

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Owning a
pasonal
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personal
cars
 can be
one
 and the most significant indication of
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the develapment
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develapment
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development
 of the country.
As a consequence
 of
industrialization
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industrialization,
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 we can see
massive
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a massive
the massive
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 number of
cars
 In the
cites
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cities
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 recently, From my point of view,
this
 situation can have both negative and positive
impact
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impacts
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 on not only individuals
,
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but
also
government
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the government
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. To commence with, the first positive side, I can say that having
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a personol
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personol
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personal
car
 can be considered safe and sound, especially for women. As we realise,
the
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crowded places especially public transport are
one
 of the best places for psychopaths to commit sexual harassment and
abusement
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.
Unfortunately
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Unfortunately,
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 nowadays
this
 embarrassing and graceful crime happens to men as well. That's the reason why I see owning a
car
 as the best solution
of
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preventing to these behaviors.
In addition
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,
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If
one
 has their own
car
, it's beneficial for these to save their time. Especially when it’s time to go to work and be back home.
Besides
, their itineraries don't always match the way you want to travel.
As a
result
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result,
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 you have to travel more way
that
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than
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 you
dant
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don't
 desire, to reach your destination. It's not the only point to
make
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making
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 you wait on the bus,
bublic
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public
transports
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transport
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 have too many stops in order to pick people up
trom
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from
 different point of the itinerary. All these reasons are irritating for a person that works too many hours and rests less, Despite all these positive sides increasing the number of
cars
 has negative impacts as well.
Such
 as traffic congestion and
car
 crashes.
One
 of the greatest
problem
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problems
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 of
the
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modern life is that people suffer a lot is staying in heavy traffic for hours. Its primary reason is
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the arise
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arise
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rise
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of
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in
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 the number of
cars
, To my understanding it’s much governmental problem
more
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than being
individual
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individual one
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.
To conclude
, all these ideas, as it becomes easier to have a
car
,
it
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brought positivity and negativity to people's
life
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lives
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. We should be able to
contrel
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control
 the situation
accordingly
.
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