You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Mr Johns, How are you doing? I am writing

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letter to inquire about the seminar that will take place next month in Australia. I heard that

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seminar is particularly based on Project Management skills. Currently ,I am working as a Project coordinator and would like to promote to the position of Project Manager in Future. I believe that

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will prove very beneficial for me and I am interested in attending

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. For joining

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convention,I do need detailed information and I think you are the right person who can describe everything as you are working as an in-charge in the meeting.Could you please tell me the duration of the program and all the activities and workshops that will take place?

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suggest some accommodation and its price. I would like to thank you for your time and will look forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Aami

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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7 paragraphs

161 words

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You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

In some countries, it is possible to buy a wide variety of foods, which have been transported from all over the world. Do the benefits of this development outweigh its drawbacks?

It's time to ban social media. It has been shown that it has made life worse for people all over the world, from politics, to self-image, to the spread of disinformation. It's a social experiment that hasn't worked and it's time to say goodbye. To what extent, do you agree to the above statement.

Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people believe that girls and boys should be teach in same school. Others, however, believe that girls can perform better when educated in single sex school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some businesses find that their new employees lack basic interpersonal skills such as cooperative skills. What are the causes? Suggest possible solutions. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience