Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time. Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do give details of when you would be available for this work

Dear
Sur
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Sir
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/Madam, I'
m
writing
this
letter to inform you that I would like to have a chance and participate in the volunteering program that you
make
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are doing
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this
month. I'
m
a clinical pharmacist, and
in addition
to calculating doses, and dispensing drugs, I'
m
proficient in medical
team
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teamwork
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working
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apply
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I have several certifications. I would like to have that unpaid job to help patients
and
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apply
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increase my experience and get better knowledge from the other medical staff I can be a clinical pharmacist in surgical departments
moreover
, in the intensive care unit. I can start as soon as possible
although
I have some work these two days but inform me when to start. I can work 6 hours every day from 9 am till 3 pm, five days a week. If my offer is accepted please keep in touch with me and contact me by email Please I'
m
looking for positive action Yours sincerely Rafal Latif
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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