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With the advance of technology and transportation facilities, people can work and live anywhere they want,Discuss the advantages and disadvantages

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In the contemporary world,on account of technology and transportation system development,
people
 have more alternatives to choose the places
work
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 or live.Some
people
 are anxious about the increasing range of human facilities
may
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 compress the necessary natural environment which keeps the normal ecosystem .
While
 some
people
 mention these basic facilities can largely promote
the
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economic development.I personally agree the advantages exceed the defects.
This
 essay will discuss both merits and disadvantages
for
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this
 phenomenon. On the one hand,
the
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infrastructure
construction
 gives more job opportunities for
the
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unemployed
people
,
this
 directly
advance
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 a nation’s economy .
For example
,in
China
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 many
of
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wage earners are doing jobs involving basic
construction
.
On the other hand
, because of transportation system development ,
people
 can conveniently move from their
residence
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residences
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 to
any
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other places.And
this
 well-developed system
also
speed
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 up the
construction
 of
rural
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the rural
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 area. But in China,uncontrolled sprawl
was
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also
 caused some environmental problems in the early ages.
Hence
,government introduce policies
to
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for
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 balanced
construction
,so environmental issues are not
that
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 serious as before.
To sum up
,all aforementioned points,can bring us to
conclusion
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the conclusion
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 that,
although
 infrastructure
construction
 has some defects to the environment,
moreover
 it may cause some natural
catastrophe
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catastrophes
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,for human lives,
this
 is still necessary to advance the technology and transportation facilities
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