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Some people believe that a college or university education should be available to all students. Others believe that higher education should be available only to good students. Discuss these views. Which view do you agree with? Explain why.

#people #college #university #education #students
Education
 becomes necessary in our life
especially
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 for people who want to be successful person and
education
 is one of
tools
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the tools
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 to support us become a good character. People say that
higher
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education
 which we get, we can get
better
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a better
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 personality too. They believe that higher
education
 should be available only to good
students
.
While
 several people agree with the statement,
the
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others think that
study
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studying
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 in a
university
 or college should be available to all
students
. Analyzing both
of
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views will show
this
. On the one hand, it is certainly true that higher
education
 is not very simple for everyone to achieve a degree. There are many
students
 who fail in
university
education
 and have to resign from advanced levels.
As
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this
 problem, many
education
 organizations are concerned that
this
 advanced
education
 should be available only
good
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students
 who are qualified because it can preclude
lower level
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students
 to get in and decrease the possible percentage of failed
students
.
On the other hand
, there are abundant reasons to support the latter group.
Firstly
, every student should have the fundamental right to study whatever they want. The opportunity to get
in
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 a
university
 cannot be restricted only
for
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to
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 smart
students
. If
lower level
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lower-level
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students
 meet the requirement that
qualify
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 them
to
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for
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 their advanced
education
, they will definitely be able to pursue their professions
in
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 a higher level.
Moreover
, in
university
, there are many majors or causes for all
students
. There are not only difficult areas in academic fields, but other general skills or technological majors are
also
 available.
For example
, some
students
 may choose to study art, which
is focus
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 on their
performances
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 and specific skills.
Finally
, they could become famous artists and be professionals in the line.
Therefore
, higher
education
 should not restrict
for
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to
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 only smart
students
 but should offer all necessary skills for different groups of
students
.
To sum
up
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 with
opinion
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, everyone should have
basic
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a basic
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 right to continue their studies.
The higher
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education
 is very beneficial for
students
. Hopefully, with a variety
fields
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of fields
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 in
university
, it promotes citizens to achieve a credential degree which
also
 builds the future of
nation
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the nation
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 and boosts
national
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the national
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 economy.
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