Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think is a positive or a negative development?
It's becoming more popular among
children
to waste their free time
on their smartphones
.Many children
in the world are addicted to playing games
on their phones. Therefore
they tend to spend their spare time
on social media or other websites.
First and foremost, the main reason for this
occasion is Parental education.For instance
, some parents buy a new phone for their children
,and after ,that they neglected their children
's behaviour. Hence
,children
can do anything that they want ,especially if they stay alone at home. Hereby, they can watch pornographic videos on websites without difficulties. Furthermore
, they tend to play some mobile games
, such
as Pubg, Call of Duty or Resident Evil. All of these games
are most popular among children
.In these games
, children
eliminate some people with brutality.In addition
, these games
can be affected some children
's behaviour.
Moreover
,spending hours on telephones can be useful in many circumstances. For instance
, if someone wants to read some books, there is no need to go to the library, they can read any book on the internet with one click and it takes very little time
. Plus, they can do their homework on their smartphones
and it's very convenient for them.
In conclusion,spending free time
on smartphones
can be useful, if they do it in an appropriate way. However
, in many ,conditions smartphones
can be a "disruptive behaviour" among children
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