In many countries, people do not recycle waste materials, such as bottles and newspapers. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?
Nowadays,
waste
materials including glass and newspapers cannot be recycled greatly in some regions. In this
essay, I will give two reasons for the situation and corresponding solutions to that.
There are two main causes why people
do not reuse trash
. The first reason is that they cannot classify accurately the compositions of one trash
. For example
, some over-packaged bottles may be made up of several parts, like aluminium with plastics. Especially, when they are covered by diverse colours and pictures, people
may confuse the classification
of those wasted bottles. In the second place, garbage sorting bins cannot be provided near people
’s homes or communities. In some undeveloped countries, it is easily seen that the trash
is littered on the street due to
limited trash
cans
. Consequently
, recycling waste
may be a very difficult thing for those.
Nevertheless
, this
problem can be solved in two main ways. To begin
, garbage classification
knowledge should be popularized among people
. The public should learn the basic reusing materials, such
as plastic bottles, hardboard and so on. Meanwhile, the goods companies should decline to use over-packaged materials from the perspective of eco-friendly in order to help people
sort waste
correctly. On the other hand
, the large number of waste
classification
cans
should be widespread in residential areas. As well, the communities can employ recycling volunteers to assist residents in completing that.
To conclude
, such
a problem is mainly because of the allocation inaccurately on the compositions of some waste
as well as
the limited sorting of litter cans
. However
, these can be solved by cultivating the waste
information among humans and increasing the number of waste
classification
cans
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