The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and the amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The line graphs below give information about the
percentage
of households with electrical devices and the number of hours of people doing housework per week in one country from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
, more and more households start using different kinds of electrical devices including washing machine
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machines
refrigerator
, and vacuum Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
cleaner
. We can see since 1920 the Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
percentage
rose gradually until 2019. By contrast
, the hours of housework per week in household
stably decreased.
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the household
It is clear that
in 1920, a great number of families start using refrigerator
, and the Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
percentage
have a dramatic increase by
90% in the 40 years period. The Change preposition
of
percentage
of washing machine
and vacuum Fix the agreement mistake
machines
cleaner
went up slowly from nearly 40% to 70% in 1960, Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
however
, the percentage
of vacuum cleaner
rapidly rose up and reach almost the same level as Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
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a refrigerator
refrigerator
.
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refrigerators
On the other hand
, according to
the line graph, people spent less and less time to clean
their Change the verb form
cleaning
home
. From 50% to around 10% between 1920 and 2019.Fix the agreement mistake
homes
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