You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your friend recently came to your birthday party and bought you an expensive present. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • thank your friend • explain how useful the present is • arrange to meet up with your friend sometime soon Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear……………………,

Dear Rajesh, Thank you for joining my birthday party
last
week. It was good to see you after a long time. On party day, I couldn't talk to you much, so thought to write a letter. I would like to thank you for giving me a fascinating gift. In fact, I was looking for a similar gadget.
However
, Apple Watch of the latest version, I find it intriguing. Thanks a lot again for buying a pricy and thoughtful present.
This
Apple watch will definitely help me in tracking my daily steps.
Additionally
, it is
also
monitoring my heartbeats which eventually helps in blood pressure checking. Using
this
unique gift, I am hoping to shade some weight in the upcoming days. Let's catch up
this
Saturday evening. What do you say? There is a newly open bar in the market area. We should try it. I heard it has a variety of cocktails with mouth-watering food. Let me know or suggest any other time. I will do the reservations. Take Care, Amol
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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