In some countries, the number of people who visit art galleries is declining. Waht are the reasons for this? How can we solve this problem.

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Nowadays, most people are addicted to electronic gadgets like iPad, mobile phones and many devices. So they are not visiting
art
galleries
. In order to overcome
this
problem need to do aware of painting and drawing in early school days. I will explain in detail of reasons in the below paragraphs.
Firstly
, parents are responsible to keep an extra activity for children like
art
or any other.
This
will create
interest
in kids to visit
such
wonderful
galleries
. Not only youngsters but
also
elders should not stick to devices
instead
of encouraging
such
talent as drawing.
For example
, a survey of newspapers says that artists are gradually declining because of no demand for them.
This
will create an impact on children and
also
parents.
However
,
that is
their own
interest
in deciding their early stages.
Secondly
, if no one visits their
galleries
they will lose
interest
in it and
also
living is very difficult run their family. So, we need to give importance to every talent in the society.
This
is not happening in all the countries but a few of them.
For instance
, the University of Osmania in India released an article that says the number of artists is gradually decreasing and no
galleries
are opened which is going deep into the seas.
This
should not happen because there will be no known future generations in
art
shops. In conclusion,
this
technology is changing people's minds and make adapted to devices.
This
should gradually change in the coming years which helps in the rise of artists and
art
galleries
.
However
, everyone has their own
interest
depending on their talent.
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