You are planning a week long vacation, and you need someone to take care of your house while you are away. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter, - tell your neighbour that you are going away - ask your neighbour to take care of your house for you - explain what tasks you would like your neighbour to do.

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Dear Meet, Hope you are doing well. I am travelling to Mumbai for

business

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conference and for one week my house will be vacant. So, during my

absence

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I request you to take care of my premises. My trip begins on Monday morning and will be back on Saturday , before I left, I will make sure that there are no dairy products in the freeze and will

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water the plants in the kitchen ,

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goos

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for one week.

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, the plants planted

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the balcony

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water daily. On Tuesday morning,

maid

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the maid

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is coming to clean the house around 6 p.m , can you please stay in the house

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she is cleaning

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I personally know you and there is no one else that

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can

relay

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on. If you have any other

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please feel free to call me, I am available after 5 p.m. Thank you for your time and consideration.

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forward to hear from you. Yours faithfully, Stuti Sheth

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

167 words

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