The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport.
The chart given shows information on
trips
made by students using different modes of transportation(car
, walk, cycle, walk and bus
, and bus
only) to and from school in a country in the years 1990 and 2010. Children are aged between 5 and 12 and the units are measured trips
per year(in millions).
Overall
, the most preferred commuting was walking in 1990 whereas
trips
using the car
were the least. Similarly
in the year 2010
the highest Add a comma
,2010
trips
were made using the Correct quantifier usage
number of trips
car
while
the usage of cycles was the lowest. Moreover
, we can see a significant drop in 4 modes of transportation(walking, cycling, walking and bus
and bus
only) and a huge rise in the utilization of cars from 1990 to 2010 respectively.
Furthermore
, in 1990 the number of trips
by walking revealed data slightly above 12 million
and by car
reported around 4 million
. In terms of 2010 use of cars was valued at around 10.5 million
while
cycles gave the lowest value which is 2 million
.Submitted by Leena Kapoor on
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