People nowadays tends to have children at older ages Do advantage of this outweigh the disadvantages

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Nowadays, giving
birth
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in old
age
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has become something people practice now.
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, giving
birth
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in old
age
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has come with some effects like menopause, and
birth
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complications
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which can actually be treated when good medical attention is
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given, but the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Giving
birth
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early gives the parents an opportunity to look more after their
children
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with their whole strength which is not so in giving
birth
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late.In
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essay,I will discuss both views and a conclusion will be made.
To begin
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with, some people believe having
children
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at a young
age
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makes them look old easily because of work that
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taking care of them but it can lead to several
complications
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if care is not taken.
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,if an individual doesn'
t
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want to conceive young they should go for medical
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often so that when the time they want comes,they won'
t
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have a problem with
birth
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.
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,the family of Ajao got married early but they wanted to enjoy their life before conception because they believe
children
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will make them old early and they don'
t
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want to get old early so I went for family planning
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when it was time they planned to give them, the wife had a fertility problem they should have solved when she was still young but because they don'
t
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want to have
children
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then
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they didn'
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know. They told her if she conceive with the condition there was no chance of her survival, they had to remain childless forever.
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, young couples who give
birth
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at early stages makes them prevent some maternal
complications
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and make the
children
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look healthier than others
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some couples do not have enough knowledge about
children
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and how to train them if they seek help from others older than them, they can teach the
children
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well.
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, the family of Alamu got married early and they gave
birth
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early,
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it wasn'
t
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easy having
children
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and looking for finance to cater for the
children
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but they tried their best to teach the
children
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right and in a good way. They struggled and they both travel out of the country and the
children
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are doing fine with their parents. In conclusion,
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giving
birth
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at an older
age
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can result into accumulate wealth health
complications
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are more important than wealth so as to prevent unaware menopause.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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