People nowadays tend to have children at older ages. Do the avantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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Most people’s dream is to have
children
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of their own. In recent times, some individuals decide to give birth at a later
age
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.
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there are some benefits attached to that,
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as
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mental and emotional maturity,
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financial stability, there are
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risks of having a baby with deformity, not being able to give
children
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optimum parenting
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lack
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physical
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fitness, unavailability, which I believe outweigh the benefits.
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, so many people in
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modern society would rather prefer to pursue their career
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get a job and have a steady income before venturing into marriage and childbearing. Their reason is that it makes it very easy to train the
children
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without having to face the challenges of finance, as
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children
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mostly
lack
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nothing.
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, when one is financially buoyant, they can afford to train their
children
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to any level of education. More so, some people
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think that it’s better to be mentally mature enough to be able to face
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ups and downs that come with childbearing and parenting.
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, as some people are busy pursuing their careers, they tend to forget that
age
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is not on their side,
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old
age
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increases one’s chances of giving birth to abnormal babies.
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, when parents are busy and so engulfed with their job, they have little or no time to monitor their youngsters and attend to their needs.
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, early retirement
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might catch up with one, thereby affecting their income, and
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, old
age
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comes with weakness and poses the risk of
lack
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energy
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required to control
children
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, an elderly man who has a
two year old
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toddler would find it tasking to walk the baby around the house. In conclusion, in as much as there are advantages to early
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childbearing
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and upbringing
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as a steady income,
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and emotional maturity, the disadvantages which
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,
lack
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of availability
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busy schedules,
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and having
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babies with congenital anomalies exceed the advantages.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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