People nowadays tend to have children at older ages. Do the avantages outweigh the disadvantages.

Most people’s dream is to have

children

of their own. In recent times, some individuals decide to give birth at a later

age

.

Although

there are some benefits attached to that,

such

as

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mental and emotional maturity,

as well as

financial stability, there are

also

risks of having a baby with deformity, not being able to give

children

optimum parenting

due to

lack

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fitness, unavailability, which I believe outweigh the benefits.

To begin

, so many people in

this

modern society would rather prefer to pursue their career

first,

get a job and have a steady income before venturing into marriage and childbearing. Their reason is that it makes it very easy to train the

children

without having to face the challenges of finance, as

such

children

mostly

lack

nothing.

For instance

, when one is financially buoyant, they can afford to train their

children

to any level of education. More so, some people

also

think that it’s better to be mentally mature enough to be able to face

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ups and downs that come with childbearing and parenting.

On the other hand

, as some people are busy pursuing their careers, they tend to forget that

age

is not on their side,

hence

old

age

increases one’s chances of giving birth to abnormal babies.

Furthermore

, when parents are busy and so engulfed with their job, they have little or no time to monitor their youngsters and attend to their needs.

In addition

, early retirement

age

might catch up with one, thereby affecting their income, and

besides

, old

age

comes with weakness and poses the risk of

lack

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required to control

children

.

For instance

, an elderly man who has a

two year old

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toddler would find it tasking to walk the baby around the house. In conclusion, in as much as there are advantages to early

child bearing

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and upbringing

such

as a steady income,

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and emotional maturity, the disadvantages which

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,

lack

of availability

due to

busy schedules,

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babies with congenital anomalies exceed the advantages.