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People nowadays tend to have children at older age. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages

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In recent times
people
 are adhering to the culture of giving
birth
 at
older
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age
. Most importantly
this
 phenomenon affects the children in one aspect or the other.
Therefore
,
this
 essay will highlight the pros and cons of giving
birth
 at
later
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age
. The pros of procreating at an early
age
leads
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 to substantial consequences.
Moreover
,
this
 arises
as a result
 of
people
 graduating at
late
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age
 or those that are attaining to become prosperous
people
 in
life
 tend to settle down late thereby causing them to have their young ones at
late
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 stage in
life
,
therefore
 the
advantages
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advantage
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 of
this
is
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 that their children are well brought up, have better attention and love and have the best
life
.
For instance
, a person who came out of
the
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university at 30 years of
age
,
such
 an individual would want to be financially stable before he would start his family.
In addition
, the cons of having children at
older
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age
is
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due to
 the fact that
such
 a person would not be able to have someone to attend
or
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 take care of him at his older
age
 because most of his young ones will still be at a tender
age
,
also
, most of
this
 individual are already close to their menopause especially the females
theirby
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thereby
 leading to no child output.
For instance
, those that engage in
this
 practice are
people
 who have no choice
than
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but
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 to get married at late periods of their
life
, especially the late bloomers in marriage. In conclusion, though the high rate of giving
birth
 at higher
age
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ages
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 is becoming alarming, individuals should try to make sure that there is equilibrium in human affairs by giving
birth
 at
early
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age
 because it reduces health complications
such
fibromyalgia
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as fibromyalgia
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, heart risk and the
likes
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.
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