The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after 5 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the given chart illustrates the percentage of undergraduate
pupil
from one university who were able Fix the agreement mistake
pupils
get
a workplace after finishing Add the particle
to get
degree
courses Correct pronoun usage
their degree
in addition
the table demonstrates the ranges of Linking Words
salary
of Anthropology undergraduate students' after five years workplace.
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overall
, ex Linking Words
students'
from one higher education who got full-time work the highest and the various type Change noun form
students
job
got Change preposition
of job
highest
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the highest
salary
after five years in the Use synonyms
goverment
sector.
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government
the
begin with the pie chart, the highest proportion graduated in Correct article usage
apply
full-time
workplace at 52%, Add an article
the full-time
whereas
part-time job was higher than graduates get work (unemployed) at 15% and 12% respectively. we can see based on Linking Words
pie
chart, full-time Add an article
a pie
the pie
post graduate
study and not know has Add a hyphen
post-graduate
a
same proportion as 8% and the smallest Correct article usage
the
precentage
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percentage
in
graduates was 5%.
based on Change preposition
of
table
, we can see the highest Add an article
a table
the table
salary
after 5 years was considered $100.000+ which type Use synonyms
job
in Change preposition
of job
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the goverment
goverment
sector, and the second rank Correct your spelling
government
salary
and the third rank has been gap Use synonyms
10
% between freelance Change preposition
of 10
consultance
and private companies, even though, Correct your spelling
consultancy
consultants
th
freelance Correct your spelling
the
consultance
was bigger salaries than private companies.Correct your spelling
consultancy
consultants
consultant
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