The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after 5 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after 5 years.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the given chart illustrates the percentage of undergraduate
pupil
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pupils
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from one university who were able
get
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a workplace after finishing
degree
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their degree
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courses
in addition
the table demonstrates the ranges of
salary
of Anthropology undergraduate students' after five years workplace.
overall
, ex
students'
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students
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from one higher education who got full-time work the highest and the various type
job
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of job
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got
highest
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the highest
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salary
after five years in the
goverment
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government
sector.
the
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apply
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begin with the pie chart, the highest proportion graduated in
full-time
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the full-time
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workplace at 52%,
whereas
part-time job was higher than graduates get work (unemployed) at 15% and 12% respectively. we can see based on
pie
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a pie
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chart, full-time
post graduate
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post-graduate
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study and not know has
a
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the
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same proportion as 8% and the smallest
precentage
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percentage
in
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of
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graduates was 5%. based on
table
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a table
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, we can see the highest
salary
after 5 years was considered $100.000+ which type
job
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in
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the goverment
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goverment
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government
sector, and the second rank
salary
and the third rank has been gap
10
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% between freelance
consultance
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consultancy
consultants
and private companies, even though,
th
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the
freelance
consultance
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consultancy
consultants
consultant
was bigger salaries than private companies.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salary with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Anthropology graduates
  • undergraduate degree
  • employment sectors
  • academic research
  • non-profit organizations
  • government agencies
  • private sector employment
  • further studies
  • unemployed
  • salary range
  • earning sectors
  • salary disparities
  • career trajectories
  • financial outcomes
  • market value
  • general employment trends
  • relative market value
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