The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart gives
an information
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information
a piece of information
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about how many
coffee
and tea
citizens
of several Australian cities, like namely
Sydnet
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Sydney
, Melbourne, Adelaide and Hobart, buy over four week period. In general, what stands out from the bar chart is that in all cities, which are introduced in the chart, people rarely buy fresh
coffee
. It could be
also
mentioned that
citizens
prefer mostly visiting cafés for
coffee
or tea. Looking at the details, as regards Brisbane, it could be seen that 55 per cent of
citizens
here buy instant
coffee
more often rather than fresh ones or do that in cafés. Concerning Sydney, Hobart and Melbourne, it could be highlighted that more than half of city residents go to cafés for drinking tea or
coffee
. Talking about Adelaide,
citizens
drink instant
coffee
and go to cafes in the same proportion,
whereas
more than
one fourth
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one-fourth
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of people
prefer
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toprefer
show examples
drink fresh
coffee
.
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