Write a passage about the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city

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will share about the benefit and drawbacks of living in the town. in

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case, the benefit of living in the

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where there

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much

of

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public

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and many get a job is easier than living in a rural environment. The drawback when

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live in

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metropolis is noise pollution and crowded roads.

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with, the benefit of living in a

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where

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is easier to other places with public shipping,

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as train, bus, plane, trans-Jakarta, taxi, and many more.

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, Online

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like bikes, or cars online. so, when

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arrive

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in the

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city

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, it is easy to another destination. because in the

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society

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getting a job who move to the

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, because

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argue that

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city

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the city

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is a town has opportunities get a job and many accompany in the

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,

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many

people

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are easier get work in the

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than population living in the rural environment.

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, based experience, in my office

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have friends from the rural environment as in Tangerang and the location office in Jakarta,

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, every morning

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usually see the community from Bogor go to Jakarta. in Indonesia, Jakarta is a popular township to get employment and many companies there.

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, there are some drawbacks if

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living in the

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. In

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case,

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will

divided

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two disadvantages of living in the

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. In the

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,

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corruption is the highest noise pollution, because in the

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there are

group

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groups

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and some

association

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associations

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cause

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industrial deterioration, not only from companies,

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that

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, from

shipment

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shipments

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cause noise abuse because of emissions public

transportation

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as private vehicles as motorbikes, cars, busses,

train

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trains

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. in the

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is

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very crowded roads so

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is cause a traffic jam and the number of vehicles in the

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is higher than in rural and make

people

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easily stressed. in conclusion, the advantage of living in a

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is

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convenient and simple to get

transportation

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and the disadvantage is living in the

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, many

community

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communities

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get roar corruption and traffic light.