Write a passage about the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city
i
will share about the benefit and drawbacks of living in the town. in Change the capitalization
I
this
case, the benefit of living in the city
where there are
much Correct subject-verb agreement
is
of
public Change preposition
apply
transportation
and many get a job is easier than living in a rural environment. The drawback when people
live in the
metropolis is noise pollution and crowded roads.
Correct article usage
a
to begin
with, the benefit of living in a city
where people
is easier to other places with public shipping, such
as train, bus, plane, trans-Jakarta, taxi, and many more. in addition
, Online transportation
like bikes, or cars online. so, when public
Correct article usage
the public
arrive
in the Correct subject-verb agreement
arrives
the
Remove the redundancy
apply
city
, it is easy to another destination. because in the city
society consider
getting a job who move to the Change the verb form
considers
city
, because people
argue that city
is a town has opportunities get a job and many accompany in the Correct article usage
the city
city
, whereas
many people
are easier get work in the city
than population living in the rural environment. for instance
, based experience, in my office i
have friends from the rural environment as in Tangerang and the location office in Jakarta, Change the capitalization
I
in addition
, every morning i
usually see the community from Bogor go to Jakarta. in Indonesia, Jakarta is a popular township to get employment and many companies there.
Change the capitalization
I
furthermore
, there are some drawbacks if nation
living in the Correct article usage
a nation
city
. In this
case, i
will Change the capitalization
I
divided
two disadvantages of living in the Change the verb form
divide
city
. In the city
, the
corruption is the highest noise pollution, because in the Correct article usage
apply
city
there are group
and some Fix the agreement mistake
groups
association
Fix the agreement mistake
associations
cause
industrial deterioration, not only from companies, Correct pronoun usage
that cause
besides
that
, from Correct word choice
but
shipment
, Fix the agreement mistake
shipments
that is
cause noise abuse because of emissions public transportation
as private vehicles as motorbikes, cars, busses, train
. in the Change the verb form
trains
city
is
very crowded roads so Correct subject-verb agreement
are
this
is cause a traffic jam and the number of vehicles in the city
is higher than in rural and make people
easily stressed.
in conclusion, the advantage of living in a city
is that is
convenient and simple to get transportation
and the disadvantage is living in the city
, many community
get roar corruption and traffic light.Change to a plural noun
communities
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