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Although most people are richer than in the past, modern life seems very stressful and the number of people are suffering from stress is at a record level. What are the main causes of stress in modern life and how stress could be reduced.

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here are several reasons why
people
 are more anxious in modern society in comparison with previous centuries. Both problems and
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solutions will be mentioned in the following paragraphs.
This
 essay elaborates on the reasons for high
stress
 in regular life and
possibilities
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the possibilities
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 to solve
this
.
Firstly
, the most common reason is a rise in competition between each other.
This
 demands more
efforts
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effort
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.
For instance
, business development needs to
spent
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 much time and energy to achieve a high income. There are many
people
 who want to be the first in every business sphere. Everyone is ready to spend endless nights, sacrifice families happiness,
betrayed
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and betrayed
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 friends to make their goals true.
Secondly
, consuming society
leady
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people
 to many wishes. Our enhanced desires are the main cause of anxiety. Social media and other mainstream television programs create fantasy lives, that are hard to achieve in reality.
For example
, a bus driver watches TV every
day
. Every
day
 he sees the same advertisement
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new
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the new
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 “Volvo”. His wife dreams about a new washing car that she sees on TV every
day
. Poor bus
driver
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drivers
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 frustrate because of
lack
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the lack
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 of opportunity to buy a new car.
In
addition
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 his wife adds more
stress
 because she wants a new washing car, but the family budget is empty.
However
, there are a lot of possible solutions to the problems.
Firstly
, alternation of activities can help to be healthier and calmer. Exercises create a physical and emotional burden.
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 time for it will help to feel fresh and energetic for a whole
day
.
For instance
,
businessman
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a businessman
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 ends the
day
 in a gym, physical activity will reduce
stress
 collected in the body during the
day
. His mental status will be rather better than before regular training. Another major strategy to uplift the mental status is
change
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a change
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 of mind. When
people
 understand their real sense of life they will spend less money
for
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on
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 unnecessary things.
For example
, our bus driver and his wife will start to walk in the forest after work
day
. They will discuss philosophical questions and find psychological support for each other. In
conversation
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this
 family will
analise
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analyse
 that love is the most wonderful and valuable feeling in their life.
This
 will lead to priority changes and will allow
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us to
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 think less about money. In conclusion, today’s world results in more
stress
, albeit the accumulation of wealth. The continuous competition and unrealistic celebrity lifestyles have led to multiply mental disorders.
Nevertheless
, living in the moment, and being immersed in nature can resolve these
issue
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issues
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.
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