A large company in your has decided to spend a certain amount of money either to sponsor a local children's sports team for two years or to pay for two open air concerts.it has asked for feedback from the general public . Write a letter to the company.in your letter Describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team Summarize the benefit of paying for the concert Say how you think the company should spend the money

Dear Madam, I recently came across your query on which investment your company should engage your money in, I am writing to talk about the benefits each of them will offer. On the one hand, sponsoring a sports team will ensure the future of the youths involved. Football is a sport and
in addition
, it is a career, Putting your money into
this
path is a big time investment because
firstly
, it gives everyone involved an opportunity to be best at what they love and
also
make a living out of it,
furthermore
, in future when they are well adapted in the game, it will promote the economy in general.
for instance
, the Super Eagles of Nigeria, not only add to the nation's glory but
also
add to the growth of its economy in numerous ways.
On the other hand
, paying for a concert is great as it will cater for the mental health of a lot of individuals. Most people are fully engaged with work and the desire to be promoted at work in order to make more income that they forget to relax and have fun once in a
while
,
this
program will remind them of the need to care for one's self,
furthermore
, some people have never been to something of
this
nature before
due to
lack of funds,
this
will be a great opportunity for
such
individuals. Both pathways have their numerous benefits but in my opinion, I will advise that the company look more in the direction of sponsoring the sports team because I believe that the youths are the future of any country and any investment in them promotes the well-being of that country in years to come. Yours faithfully Chidinma Agape
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