You are living in a University residence, and you have a problem with the high levels of noise from a new campus restaurant which is open late at night. Write a letter to the governor of the University. In your letter, Complain about the situation Say why this is a problem And propose ways to reduce the noise

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter to complain about the problem that we are facing these days

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the new restaurant on our college campus.

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we are delighted by adding a new facility to our campus.

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, the noise coming from the restaurant because of motorbikes and music keeps disturbing us.

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,The restaurant is open till late at night and

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is the time when most of the students study. As you already know that we have our final exams in the upcoming weeks.

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, we have to sleep well at night so that I can concentrate more on my studies in the morning. I request you to take possible action on

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matter as soon as possible. One possible solution for that would be to limit the opening hours at night time could be limited or you can limit the time for the music or arrange parking nearby for the students. I will look forward to hearing from you. Yours Faithfully, Ramesh.

jazz Fri May 19 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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6 paragraphs

166 words

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