The graph below shows the average numbers of Vietnamese students studying in France, Russia and America between 2000 and 2015.

The graph below shows the average numbers of Vietnamese students studying in France, Russia and America between 2000 and 2015.
The line graph gives information about studying average
number
Vietnamese
Change preposition
of Vietnamese
show examples
students
in
France
,
Russia
and USA. The units are measured in millions
in
Change preposition
from
show examples
2000 to 2015.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the
number
of
Vietnamese
students
studying in America went up sharply over the period shown.
However
, the same
figure
for
France
and
Russia
witnessed a fluctuation. The data of
average
Change the article
an average
the average
show examples
number
of
Vietnamese
students
studying in America increased marginally less than 2 in 2000 to 5 in 2015. And reach
of
Change preposition
apply
show examples
pick 5. The same data of
Vietnamese
students
studying in
France
and
Russia
experienced a fluctuation. The
number
of average
Vietnamese
students
studying in
Frence
Correct your spelling
France
reduced slowly from less than 4 in 2000 to less than 3 in 2005.
This
figure
stagnated at less than 3 from 2005 to 2010. The
number
of
Vietnamese
students
studying in
France
increased significantly from less than 3 in 2010 to more than 4 in 2015. The same
figure
of
Vietnamese
students
studying in
Russia
decreased sharply from 3 in 2000 to less than 2 in 2010. The
figure
for
Vietnamese
students
studying in
Russia
grew gradually from less than 2 in 2010 to less than 3 in 2015
Submitted by moxinurabjalilova on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words number, vietnamese, students, france, russia, figure with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
What to do next:
Look at other essays:

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!