You have heard about plans to build new apartments in a public park near your home You want to give your opinion about this Write a letter to the editor of your local newspaper In your letter Explain how you learnt about these plans Say what you think of the park, give your opinions on the plans

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Hi Mr/Mrs I've been writing

this

letter to you after I've read about the intentions of the local government to build apartments in Palace Park which is near my house, despite the big accomplishment it is

nevertheless

it does have annoying things.

Although

,building apartments are essential to provide greater opportunities for

people

to live there

as well as

enjoy the amazing services that our city offers,unfortunately, the process of construction that goes on is harmful to the living

people

of the neighbourhood since materials that are used in building thrown in the street which make our passing over them by our cars a little bit disturbing

besides

, the environment that gets disturbed affecting the air condition. Hopefully, you can arrange with the company that handles the situation to be more careful about that job which will be appreciated by

people

furthermore

we are preparing to welcome the upcoming

people

that gonna live there. Best regards, Yousif.

Submitted by yusif_salih on Fri May 19 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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156 words

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You have heard about plans to build new apartments in a public park near your home You want to give your opinion about this Write a letter to the editor of your local newspaper In your letter Explain how you learnt about these plans Say what you think of the park, give your opinions on the plans

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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