You have heard about plans to build new apartments in a public park near your home You want to give your opinion about this Write a letter to the editor of your local newspaper In your letter Explain how you learnt about these plans Say what you think of the park, give your opinions on the plans

Hi Mr/Mrs I've been writing
this
letter to you after I've read about the intentions of the local government to build apartments in Palace Park which is near my house, despite the big accomplishment it is
nevertheless
it does have annoying things.
Although
,building apartments are essential to provide greater opportunities for
people
to live there
as well as
enjoy the amazing services that our city offers,unfortunately, the process of construction that goes on is harmful to the living
people
of the neighbourhood since materials that are used in building thrown in the street which make our passing over them by our cars a little bit disturbing
besides
, the environment that gets disturbed affecting the air condition. Hopefully, you can arrange with the company that handles the situation to be more careful about that job which will be appreciated by
people
furthermore
we are preparing to welcome the upcoming
people
that gonna live there. Best regards, Yousif.
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