The graph gives information informs regarding the average of carbon dioxide emissions (per person) in four different countries, the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal, from 1967 to 2007.

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The graph informs regarding the average of carbon dioxide emissions (per person) in four different countries, the United Kingdom,

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, Italy, and Portugal, from 1967 to 2007. In general, carbon dioxide

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in the UK and

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had downward trends,

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Italy and Portugal had opposite trends . Regarding the UK, the

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was the highest among the other countries over the year even though it was dipping to roughly below 9 metric tonnes in 2007. In

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, there was rising

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emission

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from 1967 until it reached its peak in 1977 with slightly more than 10 metric tonnes. After that, the

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was falling dramatically by roughly almost

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half.

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, Italy and Portugal were rising

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respectively yet, in Italy, from 1997 to 2007 the

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was static

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below 8 metric tonnes. Meanwhile, the rising in Portugal does not change the fact that they still

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the country with

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the least

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of carbon dioxide compared to the others. But, in 2007, the

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in Portugal roughly had the same value with

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The graph gives information informs regarding the average of carbon dioxide emissions (per person) in four different countries, the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal, from 1967 to 2007.

Nowadays longer distances are travelled by people to work and study on a daily basis. Some considered it to be a negative development. While others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some feel that it is impossible for a country to be economically progressive and environmentally friendly at the same time. Others disagree with this view. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.

Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas.

Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinion as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that women should be treated as equal to men when applying for a job with police or the military. Others think women are less suitable for this kind of job. Discuss both views and give your opinion.