The diagram illustrates the stages of composting recycled organic waste to produce a natural fertilizer for the garden.

The diagram illustrates the stages of composting recycled organic waste to produce a natural fertilizer for the garden.
The diagram illustrates the stages of composting recycled organic waste to produce a natural fertilizer for the garden.
Overall
, the process of making household fertilizer from recycled organic garbage involves about five basic steps, starting with preparing empty plastic containers and ending with composting them.
To begin
with, a 2-cubic-meter plastic bottle with air vents on both sides of the body should be available, which serves as a bowl to store the compost for processing.
Next,
this
bottle should be filled with organic waste in the exact size and order.
First,
the container must be filled with leftovers to a height of 15 cm from the ground,
then
15 cm with grass, and
finally
with magazines on top, not exceeding the second opening.
Afterward
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, hot water and nitrogen are added to the waste, which would lead to a chemical reaction releasing heat.
Therefore
, the lid must be covered so that the heat can escape through the ventilation slots.
Finally
, the container has to be stored somewhere for another 6 months before the lid can be removed, and the compost can be used in the garden as fertilizer.
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