The given maps illustrate the structure of Islip town at present and what it will look like after developing in the future.
The given maps illustrate the structure of Islip
town
at present and what it will look like after developing in the future.
Overall
, the Islip town
has been
experienced Unnecessary verb
apply
a
significant changes. The principal one will be a construction of a ring Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
road
around the city center
. Change the spelling
centre
Besides
, there will be more amenities in the future compared to now.
It can be seen that some places to the south of the town
will stay unchanged after innovation. Specifically, the school will be located next to the housing and outside of the carriageway. In addition
, the location of housing in the southern
will remain nearly the same.
To the north of the design, the main Replace the word
south
road
which is now half-way
between 2 shops will be replaced for walking purposes. Correct your spelling
halfway
Furthermore
, the shop to the north of the main road
will be demolished and converted into a modern city which has more amenities for local people. When the town
developing
, Wrong verb form
develops
a
housing, directly opposite shops, will be relocated Correct article usage
apply
nearly
the circle Change the word
near
road
. Meanwhile, a
new housing will be erected and located next to the Remove the article
apply
town
park. As a result
, the space of the park will be smaller after upgrading.Submitted by joyce.ta213 on
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